Chinese ways

My goal reflectin

This is my first draft.

I am learning to develop independence in planning for writing

Guiding questions: What is my purpose in writing?  Who am I writing for, who is my audience?

Intro who, where, when, what	Main Event 1 & Mood	Main Event 2 & Mood	Reflection  thoughts about that day)
Me,sonny,Dargaville Race Track,15.9.16,Competing against the best runners in Northland.	Getting ready to run Excited	Running (Up the hill) It was tiring.	I want to do it again. That was the first time I ran the race track in Dargaville

Linking/sequencing words I can use	Similes I could use	Metaphors I could use	See, hear, feel, think
After that we were at the last hurdle a boy was climbing over it and jumped it and he tried to punch me.	The mud was as slippery as ice, was  hulk smashing down` the hill.	I was hulk smashing down the hill.	I seen a lot of people full over,I heard a lot of huffing and puffing,I felt a stitch,I thought I was coming lust.

                                                                                                  Cross country.

Get up boys Noeline said it's time for cross country. Ok me and Sonny said. I just couldn’t wait I thought.

How many minutes later we arrived a Dargaville Race Track me and Sonny said not much people here ay. When we got out of the driveway we seen how many people were there I take that back Sonny there is a lot of people. Matt screamed come on boys your race is next so we ran to go put our t-shirt’s on and walked to the start line. 2 minutes this man said 10 minutes to go 10 year old boys. As sone as he said that I got nervous as. 10 minutes later he smacked the to wood together we boasted of.  

Around half way there was this corner that was as slippery as ice I seen lots of kids slipping over and the one boy kicked me down the hill and I got back up and kicked him back and kept running. It came to this big hill that we had to run down it felt like I was hulk smashing down the hill. On the last hurdle a boy was climbing over it and jumped it and he tried to punch me. But i still blits him of.

I will never forget that day it felt like i was running in the 2016 Olympics.

dancing with royal family

This term I have been learning to understand what ahau/myself, koe/you ia/he/she
We also had to try and to extend our sentences by trying to try and say where we are located in te reo maori. We also tried to answer and ask questions from our friends.

For example:
1. E aha ana koe?
2. E......ana ahau.
3. E aha ana a ......
4. E ...... ana ia   
I learnt that learning Te Reo Maori is fun and I also learnt how to understand what myself, you and he or she in Te Reo Maori. What I found hard is to try to first understand what myself, you and he or she in te reo maori.
                         

Today Ray Bishop visited our school. He is a Duffy hero. My dream is to by a pro scooter rider. If I wont to achieve that I will have to work had and never give up. My role model are Christian Tanner Fox,Rocco Piazza,R willy

The amazing writing.