here are two of my writing goals: Always use capital letters and proper nouns and Read through carefully to correct mistakes .
Going to the south island.
This is your mission should you choose to accept it.
Kush Dad Es and I had a mission the mission was to get to Invercargill from Kaikohe. First we needed to get ready my bag was the first to be in the boot. We were on the road and by the time we were in Hamilton I wished that we were the south island because my bottom was getting sore(so I just feel straight to sleep) 5 minutes later I woke up because we stop it was 11pm and it was pitch black.My dad said came on boys were sleeping at uncle Tony's house yes I whispered.The next day were left uncle Tonys straight away .
All of the views were amazing(and some of the views were so cool I thought that they were paradise)On the ferry you could see all of the little islands around New Zealand and water a lot of water. When we got into Picton we only stop for a kai. When we were having a kai we saw the steam boat. When we got up the top of this mountain we could see picton and it was as little as kaikohe. Night and day night and day hours minutes and seconds we finally made it to Invercargill.
First time ever in Invercargill and because I am a scooter rider the skate park was one of the thing that stood out one of the most but we had to go to my uncle's house. My uncle had a 4 year old son and his name was Malachi and he is pretty funny. A few days later it was christmas day and dad,Es,Mal,Kush and I went to the Bluff and we caught some paua. Mainly all I wanted to do was have a holiday with my family. That was the best holiday in the world.
