Exploring the south.

here are two of my writing goals: Always use capital letters and proper nouns and Read through carefully to correct mistakes .

Going to the south island.

This is your mission should you choose to accept it.

Kush Dad Es and I had a mission the mission was to get to Invercargill from Kaikohe. First we needed to get ready my bag was the first to be in the boot. We were on the road and by the time we were in Hamilton I wished that we were the south island because my bottom was getting sore(so I just feel straight to sleep) 5 minutes later I woke up because we stop it was 11pm and it was pitch black.My dad said came on boys were sleeping at uncle Tony's house yes I whispered.The next day were left uncle Tonys straight away .

All of the views were amazing(and some of the views were so cool I thought that they were paradise)On the ferry you could see all of the little islands around New Zealand and water a lot of water. When we got into Picton we only stop for a kai. When we were having a kai we saw the steam boat. When we got up the top of this mountain we could see picton and it was as little as kaikohe. Night and day night and day hours minutes and seconds we finally made it to Invercargill.

First time ever in Invercargill and because I am a scooter rider  the skate park was one of the thing that stood out one of the most but we had to go to my uncle's house. My uncle had a 4 year old son and his name was Malachi and he is pretty funny. A few days later it was christmas day and dad,Es,Mal,Kush and I went to the Bluff and we caught some paua. Mainly all I wanted to do was have a holiday with my family. That was the best holiday in the world.    

What is your weakness in class

W.A.L.T create pie graphs using google spreadsheets

Here is my investigation .What can you tell me about my class

I like that how simple it is.

Classification.

My classification.

The Country Athletes Are In Toun

On Thursday the first of December the champions of Tautoro school athletics went to East School to participate in the first inter-school athletics in Kaikohe. My favorite activity was long jump because I face planted and I ate a whole lot of sand and it was not nice at all. I put every little bit of energy from my body  into every thing and I tried my best and I had fun.

Do you find sand flies annoying?

This is my book review and to summaries in my own words.

 Te NamuTe Namu is written by Ross Calman and it is mostly about sandflies who Captain cook What sandflies being a nuisance to the maor Warriors in Aotearoa.
Did you know that they were found in New Zealand at 1777.Captain cook was the first one to use the word sandflies. My favorite part how they hunt for blood they don't just suck your like a Vampire they suck it so they can lay eggs.           This book is a really good you should read it some time.                                            What have you being reading at your school                               Thank you for reading my book review By Timothy.

The best story in the world.

I am learning to use speech marks all the time and correctly and write a good amount for a Year 6.

my next step is to stay focused in writing  like how I was this week.

                                                            The Funnest Week of My Life.

I was sitting on the couch watching tv “Tim my dad shouted “come on Time to pack your bags we are going to Hamilton. A few minutes later we got in the car

I was nervous. I felt nervous because I hadn't seen my Aunt and cousins. As soon as we got out of kaikohekohe I fell straight asleep.

3 hours later I was just waking up on the harbor Bridge I we were just getting onto the highway and I saw  my favorite skate park I asked my dad if we could go there for two minutes he said yes when I got out of the car. I was riding my scooter when I saw the huge SKY TOWER I ran straight to my dad a begged to go  up there  he said yes son we can. When we arrived at the Sky Tower I saw a yellow lamborghini.We went into the sky tower my dad went to go pay to go up the lift. When we got in the lift there was a glas pecs and I was standing on it(we were going up pretty fast I was getting a little bit scared) When we were up the top my dad was scared to go across the glass. I think he was deing a litil chiken.Dad sead we are going to go doun now. We left to H town.

We arrived at Hamilton at 2 AM my dad was driving through town looking for a place to sleep all of the moth balls were fill I just went back to sleep. I woke up at 12.30 pm and my dad sead boys do you want to go to  Blastacars drifting ko kars. And we shouted yes so we went to go pay but there was only one problem it was 300 dollars but my Uncle said I will pay for the kids which was 200$ my dad payed for him and Kush which was 100$. We go on them I was ready to drift when I took off I started sliding it was spectacular. Through the mitill I got in trudgill for crashing to much and I was going as fast as a lamborghini going top speed.  On the lust lap I got kicked of. I was laughing too much my cheeks were sore and I just about peeing myself. That was fun. When we got back to my aunt's house it was dark. So  went straight to sleep.

The next day we had to go home but we dun one more thing leap trampoline park. I thought is was going to be like my tramp but it wasn't it was way banister. Then I got use to is and started doing flips then Es shouted come there's basketball hoops so  I Tried to run there but every 5 steps i would take i would bounce and land straight on my face. So I got onto wood and ran to the hoops it was fun I was trying to forward flip and shoot and it only happened once and that nearly took all of my hours. A few minutes Esonde and I were trying to jump the boxes half way through that  I spear tackled Es  in mid air. We were hard out laughing.   

  Nothing like those few days.

Manta Ray

This week I was learning to write a poems with assonance. Assonance is some vowel sounds

In the gulf of Mexico Manta ray fly

So high up in the sky

The question is why?

They must want to touch the sky

They are all Doing tricks

Some are THAT good they do flips

All hundred at a time

Maybe that’s a dream of  mine

Does anybody else want to fly?

You might have a dream like mine

My next step is to learn about alliteration and include it in my poems.