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I am learning to use speech marks all the time and correctly and write a good amount for a Year 6.

my next step is to stay focused in writing  like how I was this week.

                                                            The Funnest Week of My Life.

I was sitting on the couch watching tv “Tim my dad shouted “come on Time to pack your bags we are going to Hamilton. A few minutes later we got in the car

I was nervous. I felt nervous because I hadn't seen my Aunt and cousins. As soon as we got out of kaikohekohe I fell straight asleep.

3 hours later I was just waking up on the harbor Bridge I we were just getting onto the highway and I saw  my favorite skate park I asked my dad if we could go there for two minutes he said yes when I got out of the car. I was riding my scooter when I saw the huge SKY TOWER I ran straight to my dad a begged to go  up there  he said yes son we can. When we arrived at the Sky Tower I saw a yellow lamborghini.We went into the sky tower my dad went to go pay to go up the lift. When we got in the lift there was a glas pecs and I was standing on it(we were going up pretty fast I was getting a little bit scared) When we were up the top my dad was scared to go across the glass. I think he was deing a litil chiken.Dad sead we are going to go doun now. We left to H town.

We arrived at Hamilton at 2 AM my dad was driving through town looking for a place to sleep all of the moth balls were fill I just went back to sleep. I woke up at 12.30 pm and my dad sead boys do you want to go to  Blastacars drifting ko kars. And we shouted yes so we went to go pay but there was only one problem it was 300 dollars but my Uncle said I will pay for the kids which was 200$ my dad payed for him and Kush which was 100$. We go on them I was ready to drift when I took off I started sliding it was spectacular. Through the mitill I got in trudgill for crashing to much and I was going as fast as a lamborghini going top speed.  On the lust lap I got kicked of. I was laughing too much my cheeks were sore and I just about peeing myself. That was fun. When we got back to my aunt's house it was dark. So  went straight to sleep.

The next day we had to go home but we dun one more thing leap trampoline park. I thought is was going to be like my tramp but it wasn't it was way banister. Then I got use to is and started doing flips then Es shouted come there's basketball hoops so  I Tried to run there but every 5 steps i would take i would bounce and land straight on my face. So I got onto wood and ran to the hoops it was fun I was trying to forward flip and shoot and it only happened once and that nearly took all of my hours. A few minutes Esonde and I were trying to jump the boxes half way through that  I spear tackled Es  in mid air. We were hard out laughing.   

  Nothing like those few days.