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Friday, 14 October 2016

Manta Ray

This week I was learning to write a poems with assonance. Assonance is some vowel sounds


In the gulf of Mexico Manta ray fly
So high up in the sky
The question is why?
They must want to touch the sky
They are all Doing tricks
Some are THAT good they do flips
All hundred at a time
Maybe that’s a dream of  mine
Does anybody else want to fly?
You might have a dream like mine

My next step is to learn about alliteration and include it in my poems.

1 comment:

  1. great poem Tim you have and great video of those Manta Rays.

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