WALT: retell a moment of time.

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1. Hook your audience in.
2. Organised time - use of structure.
3. Make sure you explain your feeling and your actions.
4. Use your language tools.

Stags VS Titans

When I got up I was ready to beat the Hikurangi Stags, as they were top of the leader board.

I had a big breakfast but I didn’t want to however my dad said to feed your stomach. It took so long to get ready, I just wanted get in the car and go.

As we were travelling to Whangarei, It felt like we were going so fast in the car because I was nervous. When we passed Hikurangi, I told Sonny that's the Stag’s home field. After we passed the Stag’s hometown, for some reason it felt like we were going really slow; but we arrived in Whangarei and pulled up at the Blue Goose fields.

I knew it was going to be a great game but a hard game. The whole team wanted to play against the Stags. I was scared to play them but I wanted to join the fight with my team; as they were known as the the best Northland under 13 team.

We gathered in the middle of the team, and roared our Tautoro Titans cheers. We were pumped and ready.

On the first half I was not on but all of the Team were smashing the Stags. Our defence was formidable. However at half time the Stags were Winning.

Second half started, that's when I got on and I was in the middle of the field, number 14.

We were in the lead and I was so close to scoring a try, however the Stags defence line matched ours.

The referee said, “5 more minutes to go.” I felt like smashing them I felt like giving my heart out and I did.

In the last two minutes I knew that we were going to win… but they scored a try, I was nervous because if they got the conversion the game would end as a tie. Tautoro Titans must of joined minds as we all willed the kicker to miss… and thankfully he did.

We won! We won! We won and now we are the top Under 13 team in the northland! We won!