Hi Tim, I really liked your blog post about tech and the ingredients to make macaroni and cheese. Maybe next time you could try adding a title or what you found hard or easy. Keep up the good work. Ka kite
Hello Timothy, I'm Pyper from St Patrick's school in Greymouth. I really like your recipes but maybe next time you could revise and edit your work because most words don't have a capital letter.
Hi Timothy it's Mark here from St Patrick's school in Greymouth. I am here to give you some feedback about your tech slideshow. I really like how you set it out and how you put in a reflection and how you gave instruction's of how to make it but maybe next time you could revise and edit because I saw some mistakes in there but apart from that it was all good.
Hi Timothy. I really like how you put effort in your work and created a blog post about your time at tech. Maybe next time you could revise and edit your work because I came across some mistakes like your spelling and sentences that don't make sense. Other than that I really liked you work. My school also did food tech, but our food was really different to yours.
Hi Tim,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your blog post about tech and the ingredients to make macaroni and cheese. Maybe next time you could try adding a title or what you found hard or easy. Keep up the good work. Ka kite
Hello Timothy, I'm Pyper from St Patrick's school in Greymouth. I really like your recipes but maybe next time you could revise and edit your work because most words don't have a capital letter.
ReplyDeleteHi Timothy it's Mark here from St Patrick's school in Greymouth. I am here to give you some feedback about your tech slideshow. I really like how you set it out and how you put in a reflection and how you gave instruction's of how to make it but maybe next time you could revise and edit because I saw some mistakes in there but apart from that it was all good.
ReplyDeleteHi Timothy.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you put effort in your work and created a blog post about your time at tech. Maybe next time you could revise and edit your work because I came across some mistakes like your spelling and sentences that don't make sense. Other than that I really liked you work. My school also did food tech, but our food was really different to yours.