Big wheels and little wheels.

I am learning to connect my ideas together using different connectives and a variety of sentence beginnings.

To be successful I will start sentences like this

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                                      Big wheels and little wheels.

                                         By Tim,Sonny and AJ.     

I think We should bring big wheels little wheels back. Do you agree? Yes or yes

The first reason why I think that big wheels little wheels should come back to school is because  it brings joy to the students. For example,when you see kids on skateboards, scooters or bikes they always have a smile on their face.Would you want to be bored because the park some time is boring.We want to have smiles on our face not a  frown because we are so bored.

Another Reason why I think  we should because we will learn tumaia and when you fall and have a mami will you go and have a cry cry are you going to say by by. No you are no you are going to try again. When you fall off you get back on and try again.It is hard and nervracking the first time you ride a scooter,skateborde or bike. When you go down the ramp feels like you are going down the fearfall. You will have the time of your life when the first time you open scooter,bike or skateboards.

In summary, I think we should be able to bring bikes to school.…

And i think this because bikes are fun and they teach us to be tumaia.

My next steps:

Be independent at using the correct structure for persuasive writing

Learn about and add emotive words to enhance my argument.

Keep adding detail to support my main ideas.